Saturday, 24 September 2016

Mistakes again


My teacher said there are many mistakes. Volumen doesn't exist. His eyes are different, face's shape is wrong because it is too plain and made with lines. Hair is plain. Shadow is made without details, too quickly.
 It seems a translation not a proper drawing. I need to think how is it, not translate.
In Spanish: Falta volumen en las sombras. ojos diferentes, pelo sin volumen, perfil de cara muy recto en la barbilla, barbilla sin volumen, sombras realizadas a base de líneas que destacan demasiado. Sombras hechas sin atención. De barbilla para abajo es plano.No traducir, pensar como es y dibujar, es decir no tratar de repetirlo. No es una copia es un dibujo.

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